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'Mi tomate' 

(A/N: Fluff fic. Constructive Criticism is most welcome. Hope you enjoy!)

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It was a bright and early morning. You woke up from a nice undisturbed sleep. And by 'undisturbed', I mean a certain Spaniard did not suddenly crush you in a tight hug in your sleep. Neither did he start whispering Spanish words that you couldn't quite comprehend, nor did he say it with this sexy accent and tone which turned you on every time when you were about to finally fall asleep.

'Finally.... I had enough sleep for once. Oh God..... I miss sleeping late and waking up late.' You thought to yourself happily. Looking at the little tomato clock (a gift from Romano and Italy) hanging by the wall. You realized you slept 12 hours straight, that wasn't what shocked you though. It was the fact a Spaniard hadn't woken you up by now. 

Wondering where your Spanish boyfriend was, you got up, taking your soft, long (f/c) coat-like jacket because it was cold and you were only in a big t-shirt, which semi-covered your shorts. You fix your hair up in a messy bun and slip into some soft slippers. 
As you tread carefully down the stairs, you see photos of Romano, Philippines and Mexico when they were still young colonies of his. You knew about the whole 'Country' thing, and you didn't mind nor find it weird. You were actually fascinated and interested with it. That's what Spain liked about you, you were never one to judge and your personality was just.... so unique. You didn't try to be like others. Basically to him, you're perfect, even if you didn't think so. That's what he always wanted I prove to you. 

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As you look around the house, to sadly, find it empty. You decide to look outside, in the garden instead. You peer out from a window in the kitchen which overlooks the garden. And you see a hunched tan figure, tending to his little tomato plants. Whistling a soft tune the whole time he works, almost as of he was whistling to the tomatoes. 

Glad that you found him. You decide to sneak up from behind him. Careful not to step on any of his prized tomatoes, you make your way cautiously and quietly behind him. Then you quickly pull him into a hug from behind. Softly whispering 'Buenos dias, amor.~[1]' in his ear. 

He smiles, and turns around to give you a quick peck on your lips. 

"Hola, (name).~[2] I see you finally woke up, si?" 
Smiling back at him, you kiss him on the cheek, "Of course I had to wake up. But what troubled me, was that you weren't next to me, amor." A cute pout forms on your lips. He chuckles, to him you looked so adorable right now. Even if you were trying I be serious. That's cause you were his 'tomato' or as he says, 'Mi tomate.' 

Nuzzling your cheek, he softly replies, "Lo siento, amor.~[3]You seemed so tired. So I decided to let you sleep the day away. It's not like you'd miss anything anyways, sì?" His dark forest green eyes looking at yours, almost as if peering into your soul. The pools of green pulling you in, his eyes were so attractive. They were one of the things you loved about him. That, and how caring he was. 

A soft laugh escapes your mouth. You plant a soft kiss in his cheeks. A blush forms across his face at the affectionate gesture, but a soft smile creeps across his face. 


"I would've missed your smile."


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Translations:

[1] 'Buenas dias, amor.~' - 'Good morning, love.~'
[2] 'Hola, (Name).~' - 'Hi, (Name).~'
[3] 'Lo siento, amor.~' - 'I'm sorry, amor.~'


If there are any mistakes, please do tell me! I would really appreciate it.~
You're simply Spain's tomato, and there's nothing you can do about it. XD
You also remember all the reasons as to why you love the bubbly Spaniard.

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|EDIT 2|
Semi-sequel to this: [link]
|EDIT|

Thanks to some helpful comments, I fixed le title and stuff. Sorry 'bout that! I don't really speak Spanish, so thanks for correcting it! I can't really change the accents though 'cause I'm on my laptop which won't let me do that. (stupid laptop -3-) If there are any other mistakes, please inform me. I would really appreciate it! ^.^

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FLUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUF.

I really should get to work on my other favorite genre (angst) since I'm slowly forgetting how to write for it. :iconfacepalmplz:

Hope you liked it! Even if it was kinda short. Didn't really have time to make it long.. Stupid school. :iconsweatdropplz:

Spain & Hetalia (c) :iconhimaruyaplz:

Plot & Story Idea (c) Me

Cover Image (c) Isn't mine, credits go to the artist.

You (c) This sexy bastard right here XD: :iconsexyspainplz:
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ValkerieSky Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Praise the Lord someone recognized Philippines <3 I wuv this fic
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queencreeper13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student General Artist
My country IS Philippines too :iconmotherofplz: nice story!
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Cloud-Cakes Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
*squeals with fan girl delight*
So kawaii and fluffy!!!
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww so adorable!!!!!!!
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
Aw, thank you! :3
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome!!!!
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so freaking cute ^w^
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Aw, thank you! ^^
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Your welcome ^w^
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
Your welcome ^w^
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LiquidPrideFTW Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist
Yay! There is mention of Piri-tan! :DDDD I lufs you for dat.
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
^^ But of course! I wouldn't forget my country! :3

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Nals-luff Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAAAA Finally, someone didn't forget about Piri-tan~ :iconphilippinesplz::iconyayphilippinesplz: Tho the -plz icons are male, I prefer her female! 8D

It was cuuuuute~ 8D
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
PSH. Why would I forget my own country.

And I think the yayphilippines icon is adorable though. XD

Thank you!~
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Nals-luff Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAAA Finally found another one~ 8D

I really wish Piri would appear in the series...don't you? xD Well, a lot of us do! xD
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
WOOT! And if you're a Filipino join this group #FilipinoHetalians, it'll help us out a lot. ^^

IKR. It would make my life if she/he was in the series.
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Nals-luff Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think Himaruya is hell-bent on doing a 'her'; I saw a picture once and Piri was a girl~

Sige nga~
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013
WOOT. XD
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
XD I'm guessing it was okay?
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HungaryGotAFryingPan Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Okay does not even begin to cover it, my dear.
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
XD Thank you!
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's really cute~! Honest!

.....what's angst?
All my stuff is fluffeh~~

I'm still a third year learner, but if I remember correctly, the accents on the letters in Spanish are left to right, not the other way 'round; that's in Italian.... I noticed at least one "Sí" that was written "Sì", but I could be wrong~!

Can't wait to read more from ya, but take all the time ya need~~
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Haha. Thanks! ^.^

And angst is like anxiety. How to describe it as a genre, I'm not sure how to though. :iconsweatdrop: Sorry!

And thanks for correcting! Fixed it. And you're learning Spanish? Cool!~ I'm so jelly. >3< I wanna learn another language other than the 2 I know. But I can't at the moment. -3- Someday... XD

And thank you very much.~ :D I'll be posting more stories soon I think, since my exams are nearly over. Glad you liked it though!
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh okay, it alright~! XD

No prob~! I was just helping~~
Yep~! I'm also learning Japanese and Russian. I already know French [native] and English, though. What about you?

That awesome~! Mine finished last week~~
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Well thank you for helping then. XD
And I know the usual English & Filipino since I'm from the Philippines. ^^ Tried to learn a teeny tiny bit of Italian, German and Japanese. But not yet too serious 'bout it cause I don't have the time. Usually when I need to write a fic with Italian in it I refer to my grandmother's old Italian dictionary, which doubles as a 'How-to-Learn Italian' book.

Tomorrow's my last day of exams, can't flipping wait! XD
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome! I'm Canadian. Québecoise, precisely. That's why I can speak French too XP

That's really cool!! I got my grade in math today... I stressed for nothing~! I got 90%!!
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Awesome.~ My grandmother had to live in France for 7 years I think. After that, she no longer really remembers the language. XD So much for asking her to teach me.

XD The world is weird, when you're prepared for crap. You get awesome instead. And when you prepare for awesome. You get crap. Seriously what is wrong with the world. XD
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww...... Same here; my dad used to speak Russian, and my mom; German. They both lost them XD

Yeah! It's not fair!! You have to suffer to get what you want, but when you're lucky, it explodes in your face!
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
:iconwhyyounoplz: Family members, Y U FORGET AWESOME LANGUAGES?!

*sigh* The world has problems. At least there's a time when the world doesn't actually screw up and we get what we wanted because we tried.

But that's just sometimes. *sob*
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
....what the crapola happened to le sweatdrop icon??!!
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LokeLover Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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I love Spain sooooo much!! :iconspainsparklesplz:
By the way, "Buenas dias" should be "Buenos días" :)
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Thank you! And fixed it.~ ^.^
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NEIKUUKWOW Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Just to correct the title, and the line Spain says, my tomato is Mi Tomate in spanish
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Thanks for correcting! Fixed it. ^.^
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CrazyForNicoDiAngelo Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Adorableeee. So much fluff :iconitssofluffyplz: one thing it should be "Mi tomate"
Mio would translate to mine. Where "mi"(pronounced like me) would be my :D idk if in Spain the rules are different, but at least that's how it would be in my country Puerto Rico. So correct me if Im wrong
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Glad you liked it. ^^

And I'll find out which one of the two is correct. But thanks for pointing it out.

Since I don't really speak Spanish I just remembered that 'Dìyos mìo' is 'my God' so I just assumed that I could use the 'my' there for the time being.

Will fix it though I its wrong. But thanks for reading.~ :D
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CrazyForNicoDiAngelo Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I understand. SPanish has A LOT of rules. "Dios mio" is correct, and you could use "mio" but you must put it at the end. Instead of "Mio tomate" it must be "Tomate Mio". If you want it at the beginning then it must be "Mi tomate". Those are SOME of the rules xD Spanish is really hard language to master if it's not your primary language so it's no problem. AND thank YOU for writing it :D
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
^.^Thanks! And thank you for clarifying that. :D
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Shinrei-Yukimura Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
It's so simple, but works so well! *loves me some Spain*
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Haha. :iconheehee-plz: Glad you enjoyed it anyways.~
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Shinrei-Yukimura Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Will there be a kinda...sorta...sequel? *hopeful*
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BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Sequel? Hm... I dunno. How would you want it? I'd be fine in doing another, 'specially cause you seem to like it. ^^

If you have any plans for what you want the 'sorta-sequel' to be, just send me a note with details or something.

Though I can't promise it'll be out this week, since I have classes and I have to continue the fics for my Valentine series. I'd be happy to do a sequel-ish thingy for this.
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